New JLB site lil help requested!

[AKA]

Hey guys, I just write the first page of JLB new website! Pleaz somebody correct the english version:

Bienvenue sur le site officiel de Jérôme Le Banner

Jérôme Le Banner (JLB) est l’un des athlètes les plus talentueux et populaire du monde des sports de combat. Il détient plusieurs titres mondiaux et européens en kick-boxing, muay thaï et full contact dans la catégorie reine des poids lourds.
Considéré comme l’un des plus grands puncheurs de l’histoire de la boxe pieds- poings, JLB est le combattant star du K1 et par extension le « kickboxer » le plus populaire de la planète.

Depuis 2006, son charisme et ses qualités naturelles d’acteur ont séduit de nombreux réalisateur. Ainsi, Geronimo, comme on le surnomme, sera à l’affiche de plusieurs films dès 2007. (Scorpion, Astérix aux jeux olympiques, Babylon AD, Disco…)

Vous trouverez sur ce site toute l’actualité de JLB et de son équipe : des news et interviews exclusives, des vidéos et galeries photos. La grande nouveauté, « le shop Le Banner », vous propose dorénavant tous les produits de sa nouvelle ligne textile (t-shirts, sweat-shirts, shorts…) mais aussi des goodies et autres objet rares qui raviront les fans et les collectionneurs!

Welcome in JLB’s world!


Welcome on Jerome Le Banner official website

Jerome Le Banner (JLB) is one of the most talentuous and popular athlete of the combat sports world. He holds several world and european heavyweight titles in kick-boxing, muay thai and full contact. Considered as one of the biggest puncher in kick-boxing history, JLB is the more famous K1 fighter and by extension the most well known kickboxer in the world.

Since 2006, his charisma and his actor’s natural qualities seduced a lots of realisator. So, Geronimo as the fan call him, will be on several movies from 2007. (Scorpion, Astérix aux jeux olympiques, Babylon AD, Disco…)

You’ll find here all JLB actuality : exclusive news and interviews, videos, pictures. And the new “shop Le Banner” wil propose you JLB’s new clothes line (t-shirts, sweat-shirts, shorts...) but also goodies and rare items for the fans and collectionors!

Welcome in JLB’s world!


I know its a lil bit....lol, its his website afterall!
I'll post the new link with the site online if u guys wants ;)
Let me know. (But promise to dont share, it will be an exclusivity for kakutougi members but the site ist completely done)

[El Presidente]

Welcome to JLB’s world!


Welcome to Jerome Le Banner's official website

Jerome Le Banner (JLB) is one of the most talented and popular athletes of the combat sports world. He holds several world and european heavyweight titles in kick-boxing, muay thai and full contact. Considered as one of the biggest punchers in kick-boxing history, JLB is one of the more famous K1 fighters and by extension the most well known kickboxer in the world.

Since 2006, his charisma and his natural acting qualities seduced a lots of realisator (?). So, 'Geronimo' (as the fans call him) will feature in several movies from 2007. (Scorpion, Astérix aux jeux olympiques, Babylon AD, Disco…)

You’ll find here all JLB actuality : exclusive news and interviews, videos, pictures. And the new “shop Le Banner” wil propose you JLB’s new clothes line (t-shirts, sweat-shirts, shorts...) but also goodies and rare items for the fans and collectors!

Welcome in JLB’s world![/I]


Might need some more fine tuning English Wise. Im half asleep.

[K-1 Extremist]

Talentuous. New word for me. I like it though!

[AKA]

Might need some more fine tuning English Wise. Im half asleep.

Thx bro, that's Ok for me now ;)

[AKA]

lol
nobody wants to watch exclusively JLB new website :( :( :( :(
I go to bed....

[CentralKickboxing.Org]

Welcome to Jerome Le Banner's official website

Jerome Le Banner (JLB) is one of the most talented and popular athletes of the combat sports world. He holds several world and european heavyweight titles in kick-boxing, muay thai and full contact. Considered as one of the biggest punchers in kick-boxing history, JLB is one of the most famous K-1 fighters and by extension the best known kickboxer in the world.

Since 2006, his charisma and his natural acting qualities attracted a lot of movie producers. So, 'Geronimo' (as the fans call him) will feature in several movies from 2007. (Scorpion, Astérix aux jeux olympiques, Babylon AD, Disco…)

You’ll find here all sorts of JLB content: exclusive news and interviews, videos, pictures. And the new “shop Le Banner” will present JLB’s new clothing line (t-shirts, sweat-shirts, shorts...) and also a variety of goodies such as rare items for fans and collectors!

Welcome to JLB’s world!

[K-1 Extremist]

The Jerome Le Banner Blog site is also very good. AKA, have you seen this site? It's pretty comprehensive as far as video and photos are concerned.

[( o Y o )]

lol
nobody wants to watch exclusively JLB new website :( :( :( :(
I go to bed....


I'm just pissed I haven`t gotten a pm with the link :P

[Titan]

Anyway, I made a rewrite of it to give some ideas. You can mix the two if you feel like it. I did it becase, in my opinion, the original text sounded a bit "full of" how great JLB is, and because it's "his" site that'll have his seal of approval and not a site run by a lovesick fan with restraining order, I toned down some of those things to keep it from JLB looking full of himself.


Welcome to Jerome Le Banner's Official Website!

Jerome Le Banner (JLB, Geronimo) is one of the most talented and popular athletes in the fightsports world. He holds several world and European heavyweight titles in kickboxing, Muay Thai, and full-contact fighting. In addition, he's one of the more known faces and hardest striking K-1 fighters in history.

Since a little kid, Geronimo has always been interested in performing arts and had a natural flair for acting. He became involved in the movie industry in 2006. And we're going to see him featured in several movies starting 2007. His filmography to date includes Scorpion, Astérix aux jeux Olympiques, Babylon AD, and Disco.

On this site, you'll find all sorts of material. We'll put up exclusive news and interviews, and there'll be videos and pictures. We'll open the brand new "Shop Le Banner" and present JLB's new clothing line >>>> QUESTION: for athletes?<<<<<. Last but not least, there'll be special items made available for fans and collectors.

Welcome to JLB’s world!

[AKA]

thx to all
The clothes are for everybody ;)
I'll mix the texts to get a good one!

[AKA]

PLEASE DONT SHARE OUT OF THIS FORUM!
Comments are appreciated bad commments are better than good ones!


www.lebannerofficial.com

the shop isnt ready now, in 2 days all will be done!

[miscmisc]

Good work, AKA.

As for the opening text, well, I could be still a bit off since I'm not a native speaker, but I think you should pretty much copy what the guys wrote above sentence by sentence. There are some funny words on the page ("seduced", "a lots of realisators", "propose", "clothes line" and most importantly, "Welcome in JLB's world", which should definitely be "Welcome TO JLB's world").

[AKA]

^^ lol thx, I'll fix this in a few hours!

[sparkles]

^^ lol thx, I'll fix this in a few hours!

Hey, what happened with the old site?

I would change the famous is 'JLB is one of the more famous K1 fighters' in 'feared ' since you mention later on he's well known. After all JLB is feared by many with his KO power and menacing look and that's exactly what made him so big.

[BEEF]

PLEASE DONT SHARE OUT OF THIS FORUM!
Comments are appreciated bad commments are better than good ones!


www.lebannerofficial.com

the shop isnt ready now, in 2 days all will be done!



Fu%&ing cool man!!! Will you guys sell bigger than XL shirts? Last time I got XL they were pretty tight.

[AKA]

we'll get some XXL, but yeah french XL is kinda an US L....

[BEEF]

we'll get some XXL, but yeah french XL is kinda an US L....

Cool... I'll be one of the first to order!